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Admin replied to the topic Alani's Exercise 6 Thread in the forum Young People's Exercise 6 Forum 2 days, 3 hours ago
Hi Alani,
Yes – I love it! Great work with this piece, yet again. There’s a lot of story development happening here. We really get to see Artemis dive deep into the action, which is great.
I’ve attached a document with my feedback!
Amazing work Alani! 🙂
Emily
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Admin replied to the topic Erin's Exercise 2 Thread in the forum Children's Exercise 2 Forum 1 week, 2 days ago
Hi Erin,
You’ve done a great job of creating your encyclopaedia – well done!
I like how you’ve included heaps of information about the island and what creatures inhabit it.Â
I also think it’s a great idea how you’ve divided the entries into the four Islands from your map. This is a really clear way of showing the differences between each isl…[Read more]
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Admin replied to the topic Ashira's Exercise 8 Thread in the forum Young People's Exercise 8 Forum 1 week, 2 days ago
Hi Ashira,
Congratulations on finishing all the exercises! You’ve done an amazing job at bringing such a beautiful story to life and I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your work. You are a very skilled writer! Your writing flows at such a lovely pace and your vocabulary is always impeccable.
This piece was a lovely note to finish on, and wraps up…[Read more]
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Student finished unit 1 week, 4 days ago
Student Alani Perry finished the unit Exercise 6 – Amplification in course Online Creative Writing Workshop for Young People Aged 10 and up
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Student finished unit 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Student Ashira Naidu finished the unit Exercise 7 – Narrative voice in course Online Creative Writing Workshop for Young People Aged 10 and up
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